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January 7, 2007
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Jan 7, 2007, 4:47:36 PM
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:icondistortedsmile:
I cannot leave here, I cannot stay,
Forever haunted, more than afraid.
Asphyxiate on words I would say,
I'm drawn to a blackened sky as I turn blue.

There are no flowers, no not this time,
There'll be no angels gracing the lines,
Just these stark words, I find.
I'd show a smile, but i'm too weak,
I'd share with you could I only speak,
Just how much this, hurts me.
This Time Imperfect – AFI

Model – ~lycaneyes & *BurningPaperDoll :heart:

Thanks to my sister Becca and her boyfriend Liam yet again. :blowkiss: This is the first shoot I have done with Liam and he ended up covered in blood, he’s a good sport! Feel free to check out his work as he is a very talented photographer.

I know gore is overdone these days but I just couldn’t resist doing some more. :D Added a blue filter for an ‘Ooooh, spooky’ feel.




I give full permission for =Death-Chicks, =Death-Guys, *justportraits and =DeviantDolls to show this in their Gallery

**Please respect my models in your comments. They are my friends and housemates, not professional models and do this as a favour to me and therefore do not wish to be critiqued.**

© DistortedSmile Photography
Don’t steal it, I will hurt you
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:iconsofiaoctober:
~sofiaoctober Oct 17, 2009
what is that ???
so bad
and the blood is bad
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^DistortedSmile Oct 22, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
:rofl: When you actually manage to get some work up then you can crit mine
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~TheBrokenUnknownGirl Jun 13, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
no offense but horrible job, it was a good attempt tho
use a darker red and lipstick the same color
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^DistortedSmile Jun 14, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
:| 'No offense' but this is a couple shot, not a specific gore shot, so I find your comment not only rude but kinda irrelevant.
Glad you thought it was a 'good attempt' though, even if I am yet to find anything from your Gallery that deserves such an accolade.

I didn't ask for a critique on this as I there is nothing I would change, however I fully welcome comments that are helpful and constructive- your's was neither of these things :sarcasticclap:
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~strychnineflavored Mar 12, 2007
I like the idea behind this photo, and the setup of it, but your blood could use work it kind of looks like dollar store red paint.
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~jeszkrgr Jan 14, 2007   Writer
Gert job, though I think you shouldnt have dragged the blood up to the mouth.
However it gives a good feel and representation of this era where innocence is a willing victim for evil. Great shot :)
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`RockstarVanity Jan 14, 2007  Professional Photographer
Hi :)

Just to let you know that this photograph is being featured in my recent news article, The Nightmare Collection [Vol. 02] --> [link]

:heart:
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^DistortedSmile Jan 14, 2007  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you :smooch:
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~camilah Jan 10, 2007
Coool pic;)
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!schellen Jan 10, 2007  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Indeed, the gore is a little overdone and makes it look more like cannibalism rather than vampirism, but it really doesn't take away from the beauty of the picture. <3
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