It's a Lie

The first thing I thought when I looked at this picture was how well you made use of natural light. The light is diffused enough to fall suitably softly on the contours of the model's neck and chest, drawing attention in a subtle way to the delicate arrangement of bones and skin. 'Arrangement of bones and skin' sounds awful and very violent, but it isn't supposed to. My brain isn't working too tell tonight and I can't think of better words.

The parallel lines of the corner of the room, the edges of the model's arm and the row of tiles next to the window frame are very satisfying for an obsessive weirdo (me, not you). I was going to suggest cropping slightly further in from the right so that the outside edge of the model's arm is cropped out. I like that arrangement on the other side and think that having both sides closely cropped would contribute to the feeling of claustrophobia. Again, that sounds more violent than it's supposed to.

To me, the over-all feeling of this picture is gentle and romantic. The corset and fishnets combined with harsher lighting would take on a completely different suggested meaning. I like that its soft and sweet. That's kind of unexpected, for a fetish shot.