First of all - english isn`t my natural language and I learn rather how to pronunce words than how to write them. Therefore I make some mistakes and am aware of it - yet my grammar is absolutly irrelevant to the credibility of my comments, nor is the number of them.
I don`t write lots of comments, because normally I find average things, that doesn`t give me motivation to write anything.
to you photo: I should have been more specific bout the hair.
I don`t like pink hair, but it doesn`t mean they can`t be used in a photography in a good way. But there are two things that are wrong IMO:
first, I wasn`t sure if those are hair, possibly it could be dyed cotton wool by the looks - don`t take it personally, I`m not concerned by what you do with your hair, but there is very little of them shown in the picture and also they seem to be a bit blurred; add pink color and I`m not sure if those are hair or not.
Second thing is, they add nothing to the composition. Actually it makes an impression, that your face is very long, but I guess that it`s rather fault of week composition than usage of pink hair in the photo.
And finally about the black rose: the texture of black material is actually quite nice but the big green piece of plastic totally crappy ruins the effect, not to mention the week composition.
And I`ve seen worse photos, hell I shot worse photos myself but i`ll never show them to people, and never ever add such a photo to prints.
Well, but I can`t spell week correctly, so probably this whole post is worth crap
Did you crop this picture after submitting it? It seems like people have commented on things I don't see.
Anyway, I really like how it's close up and how the black rose is up against your lips. Intense. Too bad it's not a real rose. The texture of a real rose would've complemented the rest of the picture.
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